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| Slide 1: Intro Slide | There is no need for an email on the opening slide. I know it's a pitch deck; you don’t need to say that; it’s a waste of the limited time/attention you have from an investor. Show me what the app looks like, not someone holding a phone with an app I can’t see.
| | Slide 2: Perspective Framer | Strong storytelling slide here. Focusing on one big number to allude to the potential while also being clear about the human element at stake here is what makes this so powerful. | | | Experts Would Invest $100,000 in This Alternative Now | | A new Knight Frank report made an unexpected declaration. It revealed that 44% of family offices are investing more in residential real estate now. And, you don’t need to be Warren Buffet to see why. | Since 2000, residential real estate outperformed the S&P 500 by 70% in total returns. It’s the only asset that pays you to own it, grows while you sleep, and shields your gains from the IRS. | That’s why you need mogul. It’s a real estate platform that lets you invest in institutional-grade rental properties. You get monthly rental income, capital appreciation and tax benefits without a down payment or 3 a.m. tenant calls. In fact, over 20,000 investors have joined. | Here’s Why: | • Tax Benefits | • +7% annual yields | • 18.8% avg annual IRR | TLDR: You can invest in high quality real estate for a fraction of the cost. Why wait? | Unlock This Alternative Now | Past performance isn't predictive; illustrative only. Investing risks principal; no securities offer. See important Disclaimers | |
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| Slide 3: Story | I don’t love this slide. I like the decision to include a story, but you don’t need a slide like this. This slide is a crutch, it’s what you do when you don’t know how to tell a story and need your slides to do it for you.
Remember that you should be able to pitch without your slides. | | Slide 4: Story | Another story slide. Same pros/cons as the last slide. | | Slide 5: Problem | I was concerned with the last two slides they might ignore a problem slide. Instead they perfectly placed one and used the rule of threes to clearly communicate the issues that exist in the market today. | | | | Slide 6: Landscape | This is essentially an attempt to continue to deepen the problem. While that is what you should do here they have done it wrong. They went from pitching a painkiller on the last slide to pitching a vitamin on this slide.
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